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.Blu's Valor. by Wolf-Chalk

:iconthe-rainy-wolf:
I enjoy seeing you do full pictures.

As usual, I'll start off with my usless ramble about the defects. Let's start off with Blu's, if I may. His head seems too big for his body, and the front paw nearest the viewer too large as well. On the opposite spectrum, the back leg nearest us it too small, as well as the tail by just a tiny bit. Also, the way the slobber drips out of Blu's jaws should be flying in the direction he came from, as he is in motion. Lucky looks fine, except for the bottom part of the mouth being too thin, without volume. The blood should also be darker.

I really enjoy the new background style you put on here, and would enjoy seeing more of it. Your shading is wonderful--better than I've seen a lot of artists do on here. This seems incredible to me.

Overall, it had a lot of flaws, but I enjoyed setting eyes upon it, and pieces like this are exactly why I watch you. I apologize if I may come across too harsh--I don't mean to offend, and plus, you are much better than I at many things.

(By the way, I enjoyed reading your RPing posts last night on Kugyay. The Gatherings are always so crowded.)
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Wolf-Chalk Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks for all the critiques you give me :D They're all so very helpful :nod: Yea, as for the big head and small butt parts, its perphestive (sp?) fail on my part xD I can never make it look right, maybe you got some tips for that someday xD

And thanks, and yes, it was croweded. I was scared to look away xD So many freaking posts!
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The-Rainy-Wolf Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012
I ended up leaving in the middle. Sometimes I just can't take it.
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Wolf-Chalk Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I spaced for a bit tbh xD
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